Our task is to quickly write a story for each six second video.
Here is my first idea with video and writing:
- The man woke suddenly in the middle of a dark, dusty desert. It was hot, and sent warm breezes. He stood up. “It had happened again” he thought. “Why does this keep happening to me?” He sighed and held on tightly to the orb. It opened in his palm. Blue lightning and wind surrounded him and then just like that he was gone. He fell out a couple feet from the ground and gasped. He was on the street.
Here is the second one I came up with:
2. – Oxygen
– water
– fruit
– trees
– sun
– most foods
– twin sister
– beauty
– warmth
My third creation:
3. “Wow!” said Georgy, the little boy. “That’s why I took ya here son. Do ya see em’? The stars?”
“Yeah, sure I see em!” Georgy exclaimed in excitement. “And the lights?!” Smiled the father. “Yeeaaaah”….”cool”. The father picked up his son and threw him over his shoulders laughing
I thought your responses to all of the Vine prompts were really creative and imaginative. I liked how in the first prompt you explained it as a story, and in that story there was a lot of great description and I also thought it was amazing how you just dropped us in the middle. As for the second one, I noticed how almost everything you listed was organic and not processed. What could that mean? What I didn’t entirely understand though was “most foods”. What did you mean by that? For the second one, I thought it was really cool how you wrote it as a story and you did good dropping us in the middle. You did really great! Keep up the good work!